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Jorge Espinosa
08-20-2015, 06:33 PM
Hi, I'm Jorge Espinosa and my girlfriend is Marly Rodriguez. Together we wrote a book of stories that mix our cultures (she is nicaraguan and i'm chilean, but we live in mexico).
The book is already complete, but we can't make the edition or print it without money.
We have just a 7% of complete, but we can reach the goal if we get your help.
If you can share or even donate we will be glad.

This is our campaign:
http://igg.me/at/Paronymos

Our Fan page:
http://facebook.com/Paronymos

And our twitter:
http://twitter.com/Paronymos

Thank you :D

Phillip Van Wagoner
08-20-2015, 07:41 PM
Hey Jorge -

It looks like a fun project and it must be really special to work with your S.O. on a project like this!

I don't want to be hard on you, but since you're trying to raise funds to print a book, your grammar on your IndieGogo site should be spotless. Unfortunately, there are a number of grammar mistakes on the page. It's probably worth either taking the time to go through it, or hiring someone to go through your page and resolve any of these issues if you feel you can still get this project off the ground. For obvious reasons, I would assume a lot of people would be reticent to donate to a book if they don't have confidence in the writing.

Best of luck!

Jorge Espinosa
08-21-2015, 01:44 AM
Hey Jorge -
your grammar on your IndieGogo site should be spotless. Unfortunately, there are a number of grammar mistakes on the page.

Best of luck!

yes, i know that could happen in the english part, because i'm not a english speaker. In fact, the book is in spanish, the plataform isn't.
If you read our texts, they have no grammar problems. One of the stories even was finalist in a contest here in Mexico.
Even, if you can say to us where that mistakes are to fix it will be great.
Thanks for the coment :D