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  1. #1

    Feedback on my Project Page needed - Not Yet Live!

    Hi fellow Kickstarters,

    I am just about to launch a new campaign on Kickstarter. This time it will be about a book which I plan to self-publish. I was wondering if you guys could sent me some feedback for the campaign page I have set up so far.

    Thanks as usual, and here is the preview link

  2. #2
    I think it's looking great! The images are very appealing and well put together, and for not being a native english speaker it's really well written.

    My only recommendation is your tagline reads a little funny,
    "The story of me living for a decade as entrepreneurial expat in Vietnam - about the good, the bad and the ugly side of moving abroad."

    My recommendation, which you can of course ignore, would be:
    "The story of my time living as entrepreneurial expat in Vietnam for a decade - the good, the bad, and the ugly side of moving abroad."

    I wish you the best of luck when you go live!

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    Unfortunately I hadn't found this forum until after you launched, otherwise I would have provided some feedback. But as a fellow kickstarter poster I hope your campaign goes well and you absolutely smash your funding goals. I think you have a really interesting concept and I'm sure people will love it! Best of luck!

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